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I’m redoing the love scene in chapter eight. And I’m starting to wonder, just how hot is too hot?
And if I go too hot once, am I going to be expected to go there again?
I’m having a hard enough of a time with them right now as it is.

Ignore the babbles. Just felt the need to get these thoughts out of my head and down somewhere so I can finish the dang chapter and move on to editing 10.



  1. Olga

    Best of luck with the chap, and my .02 is that escalating throughout the book, the hotter the better.

  2. Lis

    Well the revamped version I scribbled down during RAW tonight seems to be a lot hotter than what I had earlier.
    *shrug* I just don’t know if it fits where Brit and Jas are right now though

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